Ok so I realise that I am giving the game away as to how my 'Before and
after' entry is going to look however there is something not quite right
about it yet and I cant figure out what it is. So in desperation I have to
reveal my entry in the hope of suggestions as to what is possibly wrong!
Any comments welcome about how I can improve this to be better for the
competition. Also apologies if I dont use your ideas however I am currently
revising for exams so trying to persuade myself to study rather than partake
in other more enjoyable activities.

Malcolm

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